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Title: Beach Comber
Characters: Sweden/Norway
Rating: PG?
Notes: This one time I thought Yuu was gonna have a sucky day, and then he did.
Warnings: I can't write cute things, accents.


"Gettin' dark."

Norway looked up from his place on the blanket beside Sweden and out over the abandoned cove. The sun was barely visible, the darkening sky and ocean beginning to meld together at their border into the same dark shade of blue.

Sweden smiled, just a bit, at the momentary surprise that flickered across Norway's face, and then stood up and nodded to the shoreline. Nothing more needed to be said; Norway bobbed his head once, yes, sat his book aside, and the two idly made their way toward the ocean. Two mismatched sets of footprints that meandered and wove together, away, and back again.

It was a nice evening, Sweden thought. Balmy, but the breeze made it comfortable, and while he could comment on the weather, or the view, or their day spent reading and knitting, respectively...one look at Norway's lax stance made it obvious that he thought the same. They turned when the water began lapping at their trousers, not sure about the direction, and bumped into one another as each tried to go the other way. Sweden let out a chuckle. No reason to be embarrassed, not this evening.

To the left, then.

Norway made a sound and paused, bending down to roll up his cuffs further. "Shame fer a nice pair a'slacks to get ruined," he muttered.

Sweden nodded and did the same, rolling them all the way up to his knees.

He heard Norway's snort and looked at him, questioning. "Gonna prance 'round in th' ocean, are ya?"

At that he laughed outright. It was hard not to, seeing Norway attempt to hide his grin, and after a day like today - the both of them were at ease. He laughed; Norway smiled.

"If y'want me to."

Norway's expression fell into something close to teasing. "Well then, y'best get on with it," he replied, crossing his arms.

Sweden looked around - night was falling fast, the beach was abandoned - shrugged. "'f y'want."

"Sure would be a sight."


They stood together and the tide crept closer. Finally Norway turned and they continued down the coast at a leisurely pace, occasionally brushing against one another, commenting on everything and nothing at all, their low voices barely discernible over the waves. They could talk, they could keep quiet, either way the atmosphere remained the same, this whatever-it-was between them for the moment. Tonight Norway was chatty, and Sweden did his best to keep up. He didn't mind, as he didn't think it had anything to do with clearing away awkwardness or the like, but rather wanting...

Wanting what?

"Sver, yer stuck in yer head," Norway said, rolling his eyes and breaking Sweden's musing.

Sweden looked to Norway, and they continued a few paces before Norway turned back to him. "Yup, y'are. So you'd best be tellin' me what's a-goin' on in that big head o'yourn that you'd be ignorin' perfectly fine comp'ny."

Sweden paused, shuffled in place, and kept looking. Norway waited.

The sun was down completely but the night was still blue and bright, and Norway's features looked even finer in the moonlight. A wave came up, cool and rushing, over Sweden's feet.

Sweden opened his mouth, once, started - gave up on words and reached out with one hand to cup the back of Norway's head instead.

"I see."


Seemed like you were gonna have a sucky day, so, yeah.

Also this is 1/2.

Date: 2011-03-02 04:33 am (UTC)
yuuago: (SweNor - Stay)
From: [personal profile] yuuago
Bro, I think I'm in love with you.
That you would -- I just -- holy shit I can't get over it, this is the nicest thing anyone's done for me in a while, I just am completely incoherent right now, holy shit.

I'm going to have to re-read this again in the morning because I think I'm too happy to absorb everything properly right now.

"Gonna prance 'round in th' ocean, are ya?"
Made me lose my shit. Oh, Norway.
I like how you managed to get at the playful side of him. I mean, he does have one, and I love seeing it. And it seems like I don't come across it enough in fic, I dunno'.

And then that last bit -- the very end -- that one simple gesture, it's so... Well actually it made me blush a bit even though it isn't much, really, compared to some things, but it's just so--- well, it's romantic, and suiting for them, and suiting that Norway would understand everything perfectly at that, and then ending with just those two words just works so well, and--

Sorry, I'm incoherent. Er.
I just really, really love you right now, man. Really. <3

No appropriate icon.

Date: 2011-03-02 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tinediserp.livejournal.com
l;fakdjf Yuuuuuuu stop being cute with your incoherent and now this comment has me incoherent 'cause you actually liked it and I didn't know if you would and uh /KEEPS HIDING AFTER THIS ;3;

Also whitetext.

Re: No appropriate icon.

Date: 2011-03-02 04:47 am (UTC)
yuuago: (SweNor - Get lucky)
From: [personal profile] yuuago
But DEEEEEEEEERP I can't stop being incoherent, sob.
But yes, I enjoyed it. It's lovely.

[/chases after you for hugs]

.... laksjdflkjsdkfdf
Oh, right, I'd forgotten you finally figured out how to whitetext properly. :)a

Re: No appropriate icon.

Date: 2011-03-02 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tinediserp.livejournal.com
/hides hides hides

Didn't think I'd finish before you went to bed and the tone shifts anyhow then.


Hey. On a Mac it's perfectly fine. Bl

Date: 2011-03-02 09:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mennybeads.livejournal.com
this was adorable, I always love their accents, especially when it's on Norway. Very powerful, with just a few words!

Comment notifs have been derpin', yeah?

Date: 2011-03-03 10:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tinediserp.livejournal.com
WAH why thank you!

Yeah, the accents are actually what first got me into the Nordics.


Date: 2011-03-02 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravn90.livejournal.com

this was so beautiful. I really liked how you portraied Norway's rahter playfull yet snarky humour - it fits so perfectly!

Norway seems to jsut read Sweden's mind and that is beyond cute in this fic :D

keep up the awesome work
(and perfect posting timing, you just help destress me so much <3 )


Date: 2011-03-03 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tinediserp.livejournal.com
I had no idea you liked Norway/Sweden. Welp!

Daaaaaw you're so cute! Yeah - in my head Norway's pretty hilarious (in his weird way) if you can manage to get him to chill out.

ONE OF THESE DAYS I shall write a Nordic fic not from Denmark or Sweden's POV.

Thank you, darlin' o/

(Oh no! /scoots to your LJ)
From: [identity profile] ravn90.livejournal.com
I can't really help it! there's just something about them! XD

well...us Norwegians ARE known for having a VERY odd sense of humour...that sadly does not translate well *sight* the amount of times people take offense to my jokes are endless.
(yes,I do need to start being less of a sarcastic bitch. but still! )

*cheers you on*

Bare hyggeligt vennen <3

(stupid philosophy essay Bl it is due in...4 hours...XD )

Date: 2011-03-02 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] richuninja.livejournal.com
This one was just soooo sweet!!! I love it!! o^^o

Date: 2011-03-05 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] richuninja.livejournal.com
your very welcome! *^^*

Date: 2011-06-11 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] m-dono.livejournal.com
Was looking at this while reading: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=18776622

And because the song features a role~ Also had this in the background:



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